I got a crit for my animation from our substitute, Michelle Meeker. She illustrated several key points to address. I’m using this as more of a scratch pad because I don’t have any paper near me. So it’s more for me than you.
Bullet Points:
- As he picks up his feet, his feet should be moving more in front of him and not underneath him.
- fr 80 to 90, smooth out arc to more of a U. More of a slower up, too. Right now it moves too fast.
- fr97 knee moves upward when leg is straight - fix plz
- fr110 foot needs to snap out there before the weight settle. Right now, it slows into right above the ground.
- fr190 instead of looking up, he stays looking at the poo
- fr50 work spacing to feel less like his foot is stuck
- Make him not step through the poo. Storywise, he needs to make more effort to avoid it. Feet further out on each step and arcs high enough to avoid it.
Don’t worry if it doesn’t make sense. It worked for me 